wow this was a great topic btw..........
but i have to go with acuity

white........ok you had a lot of emotion in your verse........yo came at it really good too.........you had a good storyline.......i liked your verse........but i felt that if you had better vocab your imagry woulda upped some.........and this topic needed lots of imagry.......which acuity brought more.....im sure if u had more time t woulda been better and closer of a battle........and yeh it sucks that u had kinda a blah endin but it was still a good verse

acuity.......you def had the vocab and imagry in this battle.........i felt what the key focus was imagry cuz it was about memoriesyou had a very good verse.......i liked your verse a lil more cuz i felt it a lil more with your emotion not that you had more but the imagry upped the intensity of your verse..........good job man.....

v/acuity

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