hmm....very good prosepective on the west..im from the west of canada but i can still understand a lil of that mroe then some of these cats...your stucture was kinda weak but your skileld for a newbie....the flow was ight...maybe you coulda been a lil more creative in your lines but not bad seen some pretty kool stuff in a few lines..not the best ive seen but this was pretty good shit....its decent...7.8/10...

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