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Old 01-07-05, 06:27 AM   #13
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Voted For: GKillaz

GKillaz05: ya verse was good bro. Not your strongest but still good. A good bit of wordplay and a lot of playing with his name made some strong personal hard-hitting punches. Had some good metaphors in there aswell.

Best Line: "You wouldnt be hot even if RV had a whack section...
Kids beats sound like da sound of dial up internet conection..." -I was feeling this line. It was really out of this line and the opener. they were both funny as fuck!

Worst line: Couldnt say really


Mr Freeze: Mailnly i wasnt feeling ya verse at all. The structure was way off and it was full self-glorification with no real personals and no hard hitting good punchlines. I think you used a couple of metas but they didnt seem very good to me.

Best Line:"The onli thing u can hustle is purchasin burnt out cars-Ciz im "Ill" like i went Chinatown and caught a new form of SARS~" I think this was as good as it got.

worst: "Im a Titan and u just a minor-a fraction of my finesse~
Servin ya up more than a roadside diner-So lyrically and spiritually ill lay this wigga to rest" - No.

Freeze bro, im sure you can do better than that but you came off weak this time. Keep elevating tho bro.

Well done Gkillaz05
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