Voted For: Yvonne

First of all, phive should be DQ'ed cause that ain't 10 lines man! But lemme break down your verse anyway...

Your structure was terrible! Fix that to make it more readable! You had some real nice lines in there but most of them were mad played and you kept on bringing yourself up, don't do that...

Lemme give you an example of what you shouldn't use:

im tha rap king, i rap you sing, your wearing gold plated im rocking bling bling, ill knock you out in battle and take you in the ring,
^wack

this bitch could probably deepthroat an apple, your pussy probably tastes like cum infected snapple,
^thats uhm better ya see?

Just try to get those wack lines and self-glorification outta ya system and you'll be fine...

Now Yvonne's verse...your structure,flow n vocab were tight. Had some good punches in there but also a few fillers n self-glorification but i kno you still warmin up so its all good...Get back to it gurl, keep on battling n shit...Was definately feeling your closer, had sum good stuff in there...

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