Voted For: GKillaz

Mr.Freeze

This herb fails to get me shook or "Freeze"-Antagonize ya like a video of ya mom performin a strip tease~
^decent opener

Got this bitch on lockdown or a legally binding lease-We aint even clashin its just another oppurtunity to seize~
^first part was okay,second nah...

Ill pull out ya intestine and use it to hang ya by ur bars~
The onli thing u can hustle is purchasin burnt out cars-Ciz im "Ill" like i went Chinatown and caught a new form of SARS~
^could've been good set-up, too bad you ended it with self-glorification...

Im a Titan and u just a minor-a fraction of my finesse~
Servin ya up more than a roadside diner-So lyrically and spiritually ill lay this wigga to rest
^good closer

First of all fix your structure, it'll make it easier to read and more pleasant too. You had some potential in ya verse but worded some things a bit bad so it didn't really hit that hard. Try to avoid self-glorification and focus on your opponent, read some other battles and just try to get those punches more hardhitting.Vocab was good, flow could be lil better but overall decent drop though!


GKillaz

If you cant stand the heat then get outta da kitchen...
Guys-A-Bitch - Froze hi balls off - Now all I hear is bitchin...
^hehe,nice opener

Im just like ya name becuz My Raps. Freeze ya...
Last guy used a shit flow n rhymes dat all it took to beat ya...
^rhyme with same word = big no-no...

So you wanna see a guy who cant spit nor flow...
Then go n read this whack reply dats written below...
^okay

Im chewin this kat apart hes nothin more then a freezie...
Mr. Freeze is unable to touch me like im posion ivy...
^decent decent

You wouldnt be hot even if RV had a whack section...
Kids beats sound like da sound of dial up internet conection...
^good closer

Flow n structure were tight, vocab could be slightly better...Had some good punches in there, could've been more hardhitting but it was aight for sure. Try to get bars like the second one out of your system though. Solid drop!

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