~Lyrical Nirvana~
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IP:
I thought fuxjusaword first was coo..........regular vocab but coo rhyme scheme
nice multies.......it was deceint
didnt really like kilo's verse.............i didnt the bars at the end of each line.......
and the verse overall.........was kinda boring...........
like the third verse.........was a lil stretch but ok...........liked the multeis......
structer was kool to......
overall it was deceint drop............good job.........
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