Voted For: MeN-Iz

ok battle

punches- Ill, nice punches. Harder hittin and more creative. Ol, not very creative punches, most played, and most weak.
personals- Ill, you got this, mostly for havin em. Aight personals, not that hard hitting, but still aight. Ol, no real personals. Use them.
multis- Ol, ok multis. Not great, not bad. Ill, no multis.
metas- Ill, ok metas. Not the best, but not the worst. Ol, decent metas. Many are played though.
wordplay- Ill, ok wordplay. Some witty, some not. Ol, not a lot of good wordplay. You need to use that.
humor- Ill, had me laughin. Ol, I smiled.
structure- Ol, not many stretched lines and it was easy to read. Ill, too many stretched lines overall.
flow- Ill, ok flow. Last line fell off, but other than that good. Ol, fell off too much. Auquariums, virgin line, etc...

Ill, good verse overall. Try some multis, only thing I can say really.

Ol, work on personals and wordplay. Punches are ok, but personals help win.

No Hate Just An Honest Voter

v/ Ill.Logic

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