Don't be surprised ya stuff gets slept on, not a lot of people rate poetry. It started out kind of slow, but about the 6th line it started picking up. Good stuff, keep it up. It's hard to write good poems that don't have a rhyme scheme, but you did a good job. My link is my battle really, it's a topical. If you can't vote then just leave feedback, because that's appreciated just as much. px

*EDIT* Forgot to rate it. 7/10