I don't care if people use this as a personal, but I fucking cried when I was done. This hits home pretty bad. My dad just moved out so I can feel it. Now on to rating.

Aight imagry, bicycle is a nice metaphor. Ok vocab and good flow. Your rhyming kept going off and on which isn't great, but for a lot of parts it worked. Good drop overall, work on some more wordplay and metaphors. 8/10

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