ok both had very good imagery and ive taken a long time to vote because ive read them both many times in order so that i could give a fair vote wicked you had a good drop and good topic but it was more basic in image what you said was what it was while flow was more creative what he said meant so much more and that really made his piece stronger then yours here.he talked about such deep profound meaning while you stuck basically to the story which was very good but in poetry i tend to go with creativity so while i enjoyed both poems i enjoyed flows a little more due to that .please both of you return honest votes on mine when ac drops good drop to you both.

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