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well im gonna say this battle was wack....both of oyu need to elevate...alot
IE: you are alomost there just elevate a lil more.....none of oyur lines where good..none of oyur lines caught my eye........you had wack personals and you structure was nasty looking....work on punches adn metaphores...then personals...but first fix your structure..all in all...4/10
DOPE: you where far form dope....you need to elevate alot...the only reason why you one was becuz oyur structure was better than IE....you need to work on everything also.....i was bored fo your verse......add some better punch lines......and also up your vocab...
both you guys need to elevate and up your vocab...you also need to put atleast one nice line in both of your verse....
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