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Old 01-08-05, 09:20 AM   #15
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Voted For: d-cËpt!0n

xcell : don't use the caps,it's mad annoying and it only does damage to your verse. I enjoyed reading yours,had a lot of emotion in it but try to improve vocab and wordplay. Structure could've been better to but overall good drop, no hate...

[b]d-cËpt!0n[b]: structure was good, vocab impressive and wordplay really nice. Maybe focus on emotion a little more next time and not so much on vocab and such but I liked reading your drop for sure. It made you stand still and think about a few things which is always nice of course. Solid drop!
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