Voted For: ~Babylon~

Tha Sickness

just like Ya famous 'garden' you bout to get 'hung'/*
tryna match my rhymes, ya bound to Bust a lung/
^okay okay, good opener

ya too young, in tha game, to word box wit tha Titan/
electrical rhymes, you get shocked to death, struck twice by lightnin/
^uhm, nah, doesn't do the trick

electrons flowin thru ya nervous system, in ya blood supply/
only one who shall defeat me, is myself and I/
^weak closer

Your first line was real nice but what was up with the rest of them? Just try to get more hardhitting punches and personals in there to bring this cat down. Vocab,structure and flow were aight though but i didn't really find anything bold in your verse. But you got potential,keep on dropping and read other battles...no hate...

~Babylon~

sorry newbie, I uselly dont like throwin punches at bitches
but hes contracted more than buisness deals wita name like tha sickness
^decent opener

kid really doesnt know what he's doin battlin a vet, stop i suggest
wish i had ya skill comin out my mouth, but i dont enjoy bad breath
^haha,liked last line,first one was bleh...

its sad this test, cause he's confused about what level he's got
but in truth its simple, cause im just good, and hes just not
^weak closer

You didn't really try at all but you had two nice punches in there. Vocab,structure and flow were straight on too. I've seen better from you and you're lucky the other cat didn't come harder cause you didn't really put any effort in it i think but my vote still goes to you for more hardhitting material...

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