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Old 01-08-05, 10:12 AM   #10
C-Hood
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chea, chea, eh yo son, stop ya bitchin
if rap was money, you wouldnt have a pot to piss in
ok
dog, ya rhymes are just slops to pig in
and ya girl like the cock so i dropped my dick in
hahaha...nice
i'll have u singin the blues, when im bringin the tools
that'll have ya head off ya body like the Cingular dude
lol...nice
these punches bend ya back like a straw, put a dent in ya jaw
i owned dis nigga cuz possesion is 9/10's of the law
nice
so u got legally beat, constitutionally dissed
n when im thru with u, you wont b truthfully missed
ok
i hate when newbs multiply in samples
and like 1,3, and 7 you're a PRIME example
real nice
God couldnt save that flow, so dont try a blessin
and ya STRUCTURE look like the twin towers after 9/11..HOLLA
last line fucked up but it was nice

breakdown...nice verse..had some real nice




Riot lets try it admit bitch, why u throw a fit ur like the grinch with no list,
ok
hiss ,its the midst of my fist, why u got fame u don't even kno ur damn name like John wayne atleast he got game,
umm....no
u say u worth it , first with it, nurse an kid, ur worst than boys to men on an hallusionagen,
anotha no no
binge since the day u were born ur torn, worn out , sold 12 copies and got rolled the night the fight got hype,
umm...ok
light woke up in bed said get the meds, face is red, gun spit all its lead,
ok...gun play is played out
now the feds on my dick like there whipped they need a sip of this dick that taste like chocolate chip, bitch
ok

breakdown....not a very good verse...could have been a lot betta...had one punch in there that was ok...and your finisher...what the fuck??...you know how your dick taste....not to say anything but that is real HOMO



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