Voted For: cali born
have to go with cali on this one he came harder, his lyrics where clearer and his strucutre was better, his multis where batter, his personels where much better and his hits where harder.
CALI
you say "murked" but that's when you look in the mirror,
but ONCE it shattered cuz of your screaming fear,
the punch didn't reflect back at you.. got a win!
probably outta pity for your raps dude.. poor kid,
begging to succeed.. all you got is a website,
and an address thats in need..a place to rhyme bite,
9/10
MURKZ
yo hommie u cali born but u newborn to rv
im from jerz, u from LA,but u repin it like u bout 2 harm me
But u must kno that its only a few things that charm me
my mans bout 2 be tha king of rv, nah u not gon don me
7.6/10
no hate homes but keep elevating and hey return the fav on my links.
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