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Old 01-08-05, 03:56 PM   #7
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Voted For: Tha Unknown (Uk)

uk had a better structure mayne...his punches were much more direct...i was feelin that sue line therre...gd...c-hood u had him on metaz tho..but ur verse was a lil repeatitive closer was weak and dont space ur lines...and make 'em of the same length so it'll flow better...anyways Uk gets this for a better flowin verse...and harder punches and also a well structured verse...u elevatin yo..keep it up!!
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