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Old 01-08-05, 05:29 PM   #7
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Invektive Urs Wass Ok Not Good Realli
50 Hater Urs Need Work Wasnt That Good...

Openor=Invek
Strukture=Tie
Punches=Invek
Personals=Invek,50 Had A Few Not As Mani As Invek
Vokab=None
Wordplay=None
Closer=Invek He Closed His Out Pretty Good

Iight Invek You Did Ok Fa A Newbie Not That Great Tho,Dont Keep Sayin Tha Same Thing Like You Did On Tha 2nd Line Pretty Gay,Up Ya Vokab Have Harder Personals Threw Tha Whole Thing And You'll Be Set............

/V Invektive..............
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