ok drop, some all right rhyme's in this. flow could be a bit better by evening your structure a bit.

wasnt feeling this line.

and i'm bout to blow up bigger than a cunt bubble.


this was funny, yet you drop was on a mor serious note. try using multi's.refer to tutorial's,one man band multi section)

overall 6/10

keep dropping.
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