Voted For: Personify

Damn this is a very good battle, the best i've read dis month, both verses had very good meanings in them and great metaphors..

Final: You vocabulary took this one in here, but your story line was a story line that many ppl would of used, even I probably would of used that kind of storyline..though it was a simple story line, the way you wrote it was still better then average..

Flow: 10/10
Vocab:8/10
Structure: 9/10
Story Line: 7/10

34/40

Personify: Wow, very good verse man, the vocab wasn't as good in here, but your story line was just amazing, I really like your metaphors in there too, good job, the last line in this verse was very good also.. You should really work on ur vocab, that really helps your explain ur verses more with less words..

Flow: 10/10
Vocab:7/10
Structure: 9/10
Story Line: 9/10

35/40

this was a very close battle, I almost didn't even vote in it due to how close it was, much props to most n g' luck

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