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Flyweight
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IP:
Voted For: phive
Phive
okay omega time ta roll you in a carpet cuz youll hit the floor when i start ta spit, ill soak you in gasoline and then youll get lit
i spit fasta then a bullet train make noise when i rattle ya brain i put more force on new mcs than the omega strain,
dont fuck wit phive cuz you know youll been done wit, with one hit, ground yo ass like roast beef, ill spit rap, youll spit teeth,
i crunch phony rappers like saltine crackers, youll lose its inevitable,you have betta luck bettin on the raptors
imma school yo ass like grease lightning, but instead of dancing,well be fighting, youve got some balls kid atleast your writing, my rap style can be horrifying,
you might be able to withstand a straight left in this race, but beware my right cross will eat off ya face,
when i rap i rip, ill give you a fat lip, ill bust a nine through ya hip, then watch ya trip, over my lyrical wit, no one can stand when i spit my magical shit,
i hold enough heat ta make the ice caps leak, ya think your sleek look at you son even a nerd would call you a geek,
hey Jr
your rap style is unprofessional,its unnaproved, your using big words now, im amazed you can talk or move,
okay its time ta clean this mess, im fuckin ruthless, ill bend you like a wet toothpick, dont fuck with phive cuz youll go toothless,
8.0 - ur structure was kinda fucked up but other than that the verse was cool - you had a couple of goodlines but you went over 10 lines and that is a big advantage
Omega
I know punch lines are played but mine'll still make ur skin break-
I'll have u seeing so many hard bars, u'll think u were an inmate--
All ya verses get ignored, no one cares for ur arragont queer thoughts-
While Omegas verse get watched more closely than Arabs at airports--
Phive ur a Flyweight, i'll make u ride like u were bony & clive-
Take a dive, u couldnt earn credit if u spat at the fucking bee-hive--
Son u cant touch me, the punches u throw are too britle-
Like sick animals who want the best, they always going to Do-little--
Dropping ill without trying, I know u think I prolly did ?-
Bro u could smoke cement and still couldnt get a solid hit--
7.0 - ur structure was good - but your punches were missing something and they were kinda weak - but this was an aight
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