ok king this was a good drop here nicely put vocab couldve been better you gave a very simplist image though ive seen this before in the league from others basically what you said you said and it wasnt a very deep picture there wasnt no real wittyness to it it was a good poem i just felt that it lacked something i cant really place my finger on.
lyric good vocab a very good drop you talked about basic life and being trapped in the same shit of suits and lifes trials every date but wanting to do something else a topic everyone especially hip hop artist can relate to there was madd alterary meaning in your shit and madd emotion was here beneath the words you basically had what i felt kings poem was missing and that made yours better.
good drops from both here but i was really feeling lyrics more .
vote-lyric

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