Voted For: Butters

Golden shellz

look at my rapperz name double barrel u get hit wit just two shots
theres a lotta ill rappers on this site u not
^nope...weak opener

yea i remeber that dude butters hes from that south park movie
get ya ass to another site cuz rapverse aint for newbies
^first line okay,second nah

allow me to call u lonely aint nobody got ya back
ull get wraped,smacked ,tapped then thrown in some crap
^not feeling it

a lotta niggas dont noe me here let me introduce my self
maybe after this battle, ull take my advice and get some help
^doesn't do the trick

ill be dammed if i let this rookie take it from me
ill loan u 20$ so u can get raping for dummies
^okay closer

Overall bit weak drop, vocab,flow and structure were okay but as far as i can see, you didn't have any hardhitting punch or personal in there...Try to bring the other cat down as much as possible with original punches and not that same old played bullshit...


Butters

I'll shove the double barrel up your ass, cos i heard you like cock's.
Spreading the sickness B? only cos your square as a fucking box.
^okay opener

I don't need to diss you, all i need is to just randomly tap the key's.
Golden's gay. cos it's inevitable, he play's with the ball's of De-feet.*
^nice nice

Ripping me? no way, i'll hit ya have ya shell spun, like the Turtle's.
But your just handicapped in this battle, like leg amputee's doin' hurdle's.
^quite good, no punch though

Douse you in pity, cos i mean everyone say's ya gfx are wack.
Cos u don't "beat around the bush", you go ahead & munch the ball-sack.
^feeling it

Herb's possess rapperz, which you are just a typical example.
Kid's dumb cos he thought you had to pay for a free sample.
^good closer

Solid drop: you had structure,flow and vocab on lock and your punches and personals weren't mad played, you had some nice wordplay in there too. Enjoyed reading your verse...

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