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Old 01-09-05, 05:01 PM   #50
.Ike.
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Voted For: MeN-Iz

well this wasnt too great of a battle but.............

ill logic.......work on your structure...it wasnt too great
your vocab was nice...
good wordplay in the 2nd bar
good personal in first bar
3rd bar 2nd line was kinda self glory so that wasnt working too good
overall i thought u should have made it a few bars longer to seal the deal on the win...but in my opinion you got this on complexity....and just overall a better verse

dex.........................
i just thought that your whole verse was too simple....you came too elementary.....not complex enough and when u attempted a punch it just didnt hit good.......you didnt have any personals on him
you had a couple of good bars but overall i just wasnt feeling the verse as a whole.....no hate...just stating my opinion

so my vote goes to ill because
of his complexity and personal......and his whole verse was good whereas dex wasnt as consistent

please return the favor with a vote in my first battle in my sig....thanks........
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