not to bad, a couple of stretched lines in it.

And He Brought Up Tha Time When We Wass In Autobody And First Fixed A Tire..
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just one of them.


flow was ok, but with the strecthed line's it would work with a beat, you would have to spit the longer line faster than the rest to say it all in time with a beat.


topic is good.rhymes are nice.

good drop,keep dropping.
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