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Nice Topic,Like How You Started Ya Verse Off Woulda Been Hott If Wass On Audio.It Wass Some Vokab Through Out Both Verses I Like That.Kilo's Verse Wass To Simple Used Simple Rhymin Words,But It Wass Ok.Liked How You Stepped In Durin Tha Beggining Of Each Verse And Put A Heading.Iight,If You Had Better Vokab And Didn't Use "/" In Ya Lines I Woulda Gave You A 10 But You Didnt So You Get a 9/10 Simply Bcus You Had Some Errors Overall Nice Drop.....................
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