Thread: 1mic vs SR$
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Old 01-10-05, 01:13 PM   #20
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Voted For: 1mic

1: you had an alright verse. you had a punch in every line, elevate on tha punches and multis.

SR$: your verse was pretty much jus talkin shit. you gonna have to come with better punches than this:
"i bet you still on dat bull talk bout me not ryhmin//
well too damn bad your a loser and it shows cuz yo name aint shinin//"
jus an example. really tho' you gotta alot of room to elevate on the punches.
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