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Old 01-10-05, 03:42 PM   #3
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Voted For: MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ

mista nice structure nice vocab everything kkk um you had a few streched lines which really fucked up yo verse elevate and your structure wasnt da best either i think you can do betta
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