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Old 01-10-05, 05:53 PM   #28
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Voted For: GKillaz05

ok parallel cabage is good and it dont rhyme with garbage older then your are and younger dont rhyme either problems and friends dont either so 6 of your 10 lines dont rhyme thats fucking riduclues!!wtf!!punches were weak here also as well as disses vocab was decent this was just wack what are you drunk and you know we cool so i tell you the truth no sugar coat this aint rhyme and no punches hit this was bad 1/10
well gkillaz basically to win all you had to do was rhyme czu para didnt at all punches were blah they was ok disses too struture was better then paras flow was ok same as paras and you actually rhymed here which is the purpose of rap5/10
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