Voted For: xcell

d-cept!ions verse - you verse flowed well, different, since it was more or less Gods power. vocab was good multis were good tho. such as:
"We seemed doomed to be consumed by death/
But the clouds clear, exume a new breath/"

probably the best lines in ur verse

xcells verse - also flowed well, but he was more on topic. he wrote more about God personally. vocab/multis lacked a little bit and it also felt rushed.


vote = d-cept!ion

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