nice poem, it's good to see a guy express himself through poetry.. this poem brings joy to any reader from the first line, that is, if they experienced love in a similar way you have.. you have nice imagery and energy pouring throughout this poem.. and you have a wonderful way of making a simple message sound appealing.. content is very well written.. i see you as one of the rv underdogs of poetry.. lol.. i would like to see another poem from you, some time.. keep at your works aight..

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