i must say first off your flow was nice, it stood out right away.. i like how you took a different approach in the situation, kinda blaming the other person say you did this, and this is why.. the tone was almost angry and disturbed.. especially from these selected lines:

i have misunderstood thoughts of how your more hurt than me

can we stay together? na cuz you never tried or made plans see
...... all in all this was a creative poem.. i don't recommend you change up anything..
keep doing what you doing, DROP some more poetry lol.. stay up, aight..

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