of nightmares, the flights of stairs burned into memory
destinations and the faces of people who won't remember me

this alone was enough to win this battle.. if it had better structure..

george k. took this battle pretty easily.. he had way better flow and his wordplay was pretty good for a poem... emotion was decent... imagery wasnt too good but it wasnt bad either just mediocre...

whyte you verse was mediocre as a whole... you had the better imagery, and maybe a lil better emotion, but you poem wasnt in depth... it was just on the surface.. basic i'll say.. should have came doper, every other aspect geogre took

v/ george

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