Banned: Cheating
|
IP:
damn yall threw down some decent lines but i dont feeel deph put his heart in this as much as c-bo did man what are you doing wheres the heart at homie...but you still droped good yall know that...just make sure you try harder next tiem deph...
ight check it:
cbo:
damn homie you droped tight i actually like you being in LM word....you use good vocabulary and good metaphores very emotional good creative line shomie yall know where its at now...haha....word...but yea man jsut keep that shit up ive seen good elevation in you these past few weaks...keep it up your flow is developing and your stucture is there..word...keep doin that shit homie...
indeph:
damn you droped pretty well....not the best tho i thought you didnt put your heart into it even tho you had good emotion but i think your flow lacked a little bit...but it was a good verse your emotion was good and your vocab was decent it got better towards the bottom...but good verse still homie just work harder i think youve been dry latly iunno writing to much jsut tierd...prob good job tho pz
yall return the fav the links are in the sig yo deph hit my scareface diss and yo cbo hit my other link unsuitable life....much appreciated...
-Parallel
|