Aight i only just see this. a quick verse below. Ended up going on a bit but its not bad:

Lifes tribulations

A quick short verse of the tribulations of life
If you really want to know ask Brad Pitt’s wife
Usually refer to you wife as trouble and strife
But shes split now, and shes fit with a hype,
watch all the famous guys going in for the swipe
Quicker than Twister spitting a well written rhyme.

I cant see how he could drive Jen round the bend
But She will survive cos shes still got her “friends”
Relationships break up, your left to get on the mend
The end is always around the corner, Lets not pretend

But the tribulation that’s on most of the worlds mind
Think of the worst natural shit today to happen to mankind
Unlucky people in Asia hit by the Tsunami big wave
By wave I dont mean the one you see at a football game
I mean the natural disaster where theres no one to blame
A damn shame, people left with nothing to claim
Who will Bush hold responsible and take aim?
Lets all be sensible, donate money for relief aid.

Personal tribulation, shit that happens fucking daily
spend 20mins at the bus stop waiting, aggrevated.
Bus finally comes get moving, arrive at the train station
Only to see the driver aint patient,
Hes fucked off and you weren’t even late!


Im gona post in the open mic and see if i get feedback aswel

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