good play with that. Well worthy of audio. Great vocab and you can see where the structure is layed out for an audio. I liked the flow all in all. My favourite bit:

Seems like we always end up lounging in the cheap seats…
Watching DVD’s or weekly TV repeats
This is what I retain with the gift of a brain,
I wished to leave a mark on the world all I sees a stain,

I liked this bit the best but all was good.

8.5/10

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