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Old 01-11-05, 03:13 PM   #19
MaRVJay
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Voted For: Flamin Barz

aight cool battle ya'll.....da reason i voted 4 barz is cuzz his ryhme scheme was betta n he wasn't sayin shit dat didn't ryhme rite no personals a couple of nice punches n multis..

verses...u had some okay shit but i didn't like da way u ryhmin..ya ryhme scheme look like u just stared rappin ya punchline concepts were okay but u just wasn't sayin it rite...fix dat ryhme scheme fam

opener-barz
structure-barz
punchlines-barz
creativity-a tie
multis-barz
wordplay-nun
finisher-barz
personals-verses
enjoyed-barz...nuff said

RETURN DA FAVOR YA'LL LINKS R IN MY SIG
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^^he's scared.lol
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