Voted For: C.A.L.I

Indeph

your not only confused what good is..but what your ethnic is
we saw yo pic..you white..you lie..and say you mexican..
^content is good but could've worded shit better

you do this alot but I think you might be a man..
post slut..even with that watch you got no time on your hands..
^watch line is nice

I don't think you got a life..you lie and say you gotta wife?
you don't gotta lie..only you a mod..is if your life..you modify
^okay okay

I mean nigga..you not nigga..this fact you gotta figure..
you fat..don't gotta figure..yeah you litte..just not the middle..
^nah,doesn't do the trick

whats wrong with you..better yeah..a better quest is whats not..
you not hot..maybe hotheaded..so that mustof cause mirage..
^weak closer

Okay,vocab could've been slighty better, flow n structure were good. Had some good stuff in there but not really any *bam* hardhitting punches, verse had potential but you worded things in a less efficient way...expected more from this drop to be honest...


C.A.L.I

Fuck sublimals im gonna be simple and frank
Cuz ya alais aint a name...........its really ya rank!!(*708*)
^first line bleh, 2nd nice

Get too cocky and now you starting to brag
'Lifes a war on others'......so why you waving a white flag?!(avy)
^again first line bleh, 2nd cool

Was undefeated only by resetting ya record lame
On ya block you never win.....you get jumped like checker games!!(1)
^good one...

Please dont believe him the pretender
His 'class' furthest from the 'hood'......like strech Limo fenders(2)
^last line's funny

Been owned you so this aint 'sunning'.... consider it 'dawn'
Thought he was deep got 'INDEPTH'....... then spelled it wrong!!
^hehe,dope closer

Your drop was fire from beginning till ending, too bad you had some less first lines in there but other thn those,you had hardhitting punches n personals in there. Vocab,structure n flow were tight as well...Solid drop!

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