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Old 01-11-05, 06:47 PM   #36
Paris Hilton666
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Voted For: A.K.A.

iight

String9487: this is line as good and bad
and all ya good punches, they are less than a few
and i dont eat pussey, but i'll make an exception for u
^^This was a good punch but made u sound homo

stucture: 8/10
Punches: 8/10
Wordplay: 8/10
openor: 8/10
Closer: 7/10
Total: 39/50

A.k.A:
i'll leave you wit a whole bunch of dead people like a necrophiliac/
and even if you wrote ya shit in brail i wouldn't be feeling that/
^^was a good punch

Structure: 7/10
Wordplay: 9/10
Punches: 9/10
Openor: 7/10
Closer: 8/10
Total: 40/50

so my vote goes to AKA

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