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Old 01-11-05, 07:27 PM   #17
The Black Plague
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Voted For: Kordozar

Kord gets my vote, just had an all around better and easier to follow verse...

Lethal, you came decent here, and you know you my boy but you just didn't win this one...You had a few stretched lines and made it hard to follow what you were sayin... wording coulda been better too, because you just had shit mixed up and it got confusing...couple slant rymes, like time/recognized and right/time... you had some attempted personals, but they weren't effective like the daffy duck line.. shit was wack... and ya closer was too confusing.. i understood it but u tried makin too much outta nothing... you lacked good punches... Just shorten and reword ya lines, and come wit better personals next time.. no hate tho

Kord u had a pretty good verse, nice opener..second line was ill, nice punch/personal, next line was stretched but good and easy to follow... good personal next line wit the amtrak line, shit was funny... next line was okay, pretty good but repeated the D/R thing, not a bad line tho.. ya closer was just wack, but it didn't take away from the rest of your verse, you came good overall.. nice punches and personals, a couple stretched lines but were easier to follow than his, and you had good wordplay and flow... so you get my vote

Good battle ya'll, but Kordazor obviously takes it with better flow, punches and personals... decent from both but Kord takes it
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