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Voted For: Notorious Verses
iight...yo both came dope with punches and stuff...but NV had more interesstin lines...FB ya shit was dope too but ya gatta work a lil more on ya structure...u repeated the 6 feet stuff and gave u a minus..u had multies...but to me they seemd slightly forced...NV besides the fact u gettin my vote u still gatta work on ya structure too...MAKE THEM OF THE SAME LENGTH..try rapin ya verse to ya self so u hear if it flows well and stuff...count the sylabs..iight...anyways NV gets my vote for a more interesstin series of punches/personals and a decent pack of wordplay....
keep it up both!!!
return honest vote...link below...thanx
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