hmmmmm c-bo came ok,but it kinda sounded like a 3rd grader was telling a idiotic story,but the imagery was ok he did have some,its just that id work on your wording alittle bit ok/,the emotion was eh decent man,but overall i wasnt feeling your piece at all,no hate man just elevate a little...and staying in this league will definately help you,so good luck

Final-ur piece was dope,the vocab was quite good,the emotion was raw,and you added a vivd imagery to ur piece which helped understand your take to the topic better,you also had a fgreat storyline,so overall i felt you won this in every category...

props....decent battle
v/final

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