word this was honestly a dope battle,

paramik your structure and format in this was nice and clean,you had a decent take to the topic,and the strory line wasn't bad at all...even tho i felt you could of did a little more with the topic,the imagery was ok,the emotion was decent also....

verbal abuse,dude this was illness defined,i was loving the take and storyline u displayed to this topic,the imagery was vivid and painted a picture in my mind as i read,the emotion was quite decent,i loved the opener and how you started things off with emotion,the delivery was decent...nice use of vocab also....you get this win

v/verbal abuse

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