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50: i wasnt understanding it. honestly you need a little bit of preogression, not much, just some quick help, mere insight. go critic 10 open mics tonight on rapbattles, and just by reading, youll focus in on a dope topical. not horrible, just needs some leverage.
valor: took it, nice structure. your verse flowed well from line to line. nice tale, completely understandable from start to finish. vocab was not too intellectual, which is good, cause nobodies trying to read a dictionary. nice job, youll go far in this league.
vote: Valor
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quote your own damn lyrics...
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