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Old 01-12-05, 03:05 AM   #14
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Voted For: FlOw InTeLLiGeNt

OK DJ GOOD DROP YOU HAD GOOD POEM HER NICE VOCAB WAS KINDA STRECHED BUT THATS NICE IN A PEOM I LIKED THE WAY YOU USED THE NAMES YET YOU FAILED TO USE THE FREEFLOW OF A POEM TO YOUR FULL ADVANTAGE TO WIN HERE YOUR IMAGERY WAS GOOD IN SOME PLACES BUT LACED IN OTHERS BADLY A 7/10
FLOW GOOD DROP GOOD VOCAB GOOD STRUTURE AS WELL GOOD FLOW TO IT WOULD MAKE A NICE SPOKEN WORD PIECE AS WELL GOOD ENDER HERE BUT DJS WAS ALSO GOOD STILL YOU HAD A IMAGE ALL THE WAY THROUGH I COULD SEE THE LOVE AND WHY ALL THROUGH YOU BASICALLY WALKED ME THROUGH YOUR HEART THIS WAS A VERY NICE PIECE A 9/10
BASICALLY FLOW HAD BETTER IMAGERY AND THAT WINS IN PEOEMS EMOTION AND IMAGERY BOTH HAD EMOTION BUT LIKE I SAID DJ WENT OFF A LITTLE AND THAT HURT HIM IN MY VOTE BOTH ARE GOOD POETS BUT FLOW HAD THIS.

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