C-Bo: vocab was okay, nothing too complex or complicated. Flow n structure were good. Emotion was there but i felt like you could've showed a little more, could've gone more indepth in the way you approached the topic, it's like VA said: it looks like you're giving us the basics, maybe even a rough draft of what might turn out to be a really dope and deep drop, ya kno? But it was a good verse nonetheless, just try to make us stand still once in a while to think about something you said...

final: you did a very good job, the vocab was impressive, flow and structure were good. The emotion was there for sure, it seems that you worked hard on this drop and it definately paid off cause it became a wonderful piece of art, storyline was nice too of course...Actually i can't find anything to give bad comment on, solid drop!

Vote goes to final...

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