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Old 01-12-05, 07:57 AM   #4
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Voted For: Spektikul

This battle is very close, hard to decide so lemme give you the breakdown

Spektikul: vocab wasn't too complicated, could've used a bit more complexness but i think that just would've ruined your verse because it was so readable now. Had very strong emotion to it, you could feel the struggle that person was going through,the pain, the fear...Structure and flow were nice, solid drop man! Nice job!

Verbal Abuse: you got me focussed throughout the whole read so props to you for that...vocab,structure n flow were tight! Emotion was there, was really feeling things you were saying but i felt Spektikul had a deeper storyline, more from the core...You kinda approached it in a more global distant way in my opinion, it was nice but my vote goes to Spektikul, no hate...was hard to decide!
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