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Voted For: Kordozar
Both had good flow and structure in their verse, Kordozar had slightly better vocab though. I'll give you the full breakdown...
Kordozar
In A Battle Against This 1 Man Army...Kid Has No Fellow Soldiers...
He's 2 Soft, So I'll Dismantle His Neck 4rm His Shoulders..
^first line is cool, 2nd bleh
Since He's A "Gangsta Walrus" I'll Make Sure I'll "Seal"His Defeat..
Wants Ta Be A Professional Rapper,But Got Fired Before His Producer Created A Beat..
^hehe,good good!
..........Kids A Stalker Imed Me Harrasin Fa A Battle..
He Doesn't Want "Beef",Knows Tha Outcome Would Be Tha Death Of This Cattle...
^2nd line kinda played but still nice though
Locations Close Ta Tha "Frisco",So Alreadi He Knows Who Won't Get A Win..
He Stays In Tha "Bay Area"Wea Its Infested With Homosexual Men..
^lolz, funny...
If Had A Sever Case Of Diahrea,He Wouldn't Have Hot Shit..
Not Straight Nor Gay But In Tha Middle Like Tha Religion Agnostic..
^nice closer
Had some nice creative punches n personals in there, solid drop!
Imagine.
Kor needs a life & you know it's sad when
His IQ is the same as his post per day average
^funny opener
Kid excess baggage, he's wack & the truth's cold
A veteran? nah, far from it man... ya just old
^first line's bleh,2nd's good
Couldn't spit fire with flamin' Cheetos in your sandwich
& it's sad how ya whole revolves around ya band..........width
^hehe, nice one!
Kor's a fat fuck who only types, but no one's seen
Sits roun' drinking yoo-hoo to be less of an Ovaltine
^not really feeling this one actually...
Dude's on the road to nowhere & he's riding shotgun
Did a search for your dopest verse, but you ain't got none!
^uhm, guess it'll do
Kinda fell of in the end...too bad...cause you had some funny stuff in there, nice punches n personals, vocab might be lil better but it's good man!
Still my vote goes to Kordozar cause i was feeling his verse a lil more, was straight from beginning till end where you fell off a lil near the end...Try to keep spitting hot fire throughout whole verse, was hard one to decide...no hate...
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