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IP:
Lololmao That Shit Was Decent...
He Did Get Clowned Pretty Good...
For What You Need (Against Sinner) You Did It Easily...
But Overall It Was Just An Average Piece...
But Like I Said You Dont Need All That Much For Him...
You Had Some Pretty Nice Punches And Shit...
Lacked Wordplay But You Had Some Aiight Punches And Good Flow...
Structure Was Pretty On Point...
Maybe To Improve It As An Open Mic Drop A Chorus On It...
It Just Give It More Of A "Real Song" Effect...
Overall I'd Give It A 8.3/10...
I Think You Can Do Better...
But Just Didnt Cuz Its Not Really Required For This Openent...
Good Job, Stay Up Mayn...
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