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Old 01-12-05, 08:14 PM   #23
.Ike.
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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

ok.........pretty good battle

Marvjay.........
1st bar-nice opener.....hit good....good wordplay
2nd bar-nice personal....hit hard....good bar
3rd bar-decent....hit ok....decent bar
4th bar-nice...wordplay...hit good....


Vinci................
1st bar-decent opener....ok wordplay...overall a pretty good bar
2nd bar-2nd line was nice....hit hard...good bar
3rd bar-good closer....hit good.....



overall it was pretty hard to choose....but i picked marv because he did have a nice personal...whereas vinci had none.....i didnt like vincis structure either....overall i was just feeling marvs verse better.....i like his wordplay better than vincis also....i thought his punches hit a lil harder............return the favor with a vote in one of my battles marv......links in sig
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