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Old 01-13-05, 12:25 AM   #43
MaRVJay
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u took dis shit easy fam.....u had some cleva shit in there...ak ya ryhme scheme was 2 weak and i didn't really no creativity in ya verse no hate

opener-str
structure-str...ak ya lines were long then they got short fukked up ya flow
punchlines-str..hands down
creativity-str
multis-nun
wordplay-nun
personals-nun
finisher-str...dat was hott
enjoyed-str...he took dis wun

and yo string i dont know if u flip a bar or whut...but

and i dont eat pussey, but i'll make an exception for u
^^^^a nigga said word 4 word on da smack dvd
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^^he's scared.lol
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